Hi Everyone
I've just finished my first draft of Chapter 7 (the last chapter) and posted it at the usual spot at
http://users.ncable.net.au/~barrytatt/C7.pdf.
It is a Postlude to the main chapters, and is related to the Prelude that came before Chapter 1.
I've jumped over Chapter 6, as I didn't have enough of my resources around me while on holidays at Withcott to write it, but I'll get on to that one next.
Please offer me your comments, criticisms, suggestions for improvements of Chapter 7 during the next couple of weeks.
Thanks.
Blessings, Barry.
Tuesday, January 21, 2014
Thursday, January 9, 2014
Chapter 5
Hi Everyone
After over 12 months of distractions and other challenges, I returned to my book this week. I am in Withcott where temperatures have been in the mid 40's for several days and my back has been at its worst.
So with tolerance levels at a minimum, I have taken to finishing chapter 5 with a savage aggressive streak. I have deleted over half the original content by removing repetitive thoughts, "unnecessary" explanations and theological arguments mounted to support my story-line. After all, my target audience is the un-churched (and hopefully some ex-churched) so theological arguments would be of little value.
The draft for this chapter is hiding in the usual spot at http://users.ncable.net.au/~barrytatt/C5.pdf. Please read it critically when you get the chance and feedback your thoughts, criticisms, suggestions for improvement, etc., no matter how large or small. I'll leave it posted up there until the end of January, but your feedback will be most welcome any time before or after that date.
Blessings, Barry
After over 12 months of distractions and other challenges, I returned to my book this week. I am in Withcott where temperatures have been in the mid 40's for several days and my back has been at its worst.
So with tolerance levels at a minimum, I have taken to finishing chapter 5 with a savage aggressive streak. I have deleted over half the original content by removing repetitive thoughts, "unnecessary" explanations and theological arguments mounted to support my story-line. After all, my target audience is the un-churched (and hopefully some ex-churched) so theological arguments would be of little value.
The draft for this chapter is hiding in the usual spot at http://users.ncable.net.au/~barrytatt/C5.pdf. Please read it critically when you get the chance and feedback your thoughts, criticisms, suggestions for improvement, etc., no matter how large or small. I'll leave it posted up there until the end of January, but your feedback will be most welcome any time before or after that date.
Blessings, Barry
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